IELTS Live - Task 2 Writing - Band 9 Level Essays

welcome to today's live ielts class my name is adrian and i'm streaming to you from beautiful victoria here on the west coast of canada i hope everybody is having a great week so far staying productive staying strong welcome kyber hi janiel welcome to our members this is a members chat class of course everybody is welcome to watch there's lots of learning to be had in this class we are looking at a task to writing for the ielts exam and we're working on band nine level essays hi kyber hi janil i had a good time on my vacation janelle thank you for asking hi atharwa welcome rajvir good to see many students in the class ready to learn while we wait for a few more members this lesson is presented to you by aehelp.com for academic ielts success please join us there and for the general ielts please check us out at g-i-e-l-t-s help.com that's general ielts ieltshelp.com on both of those websites we have loads and loads of materials and information to help you get those high band scores this 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academic tomorrow and then more speaking classes later in the week so make sure to subscribe to our channel get the notifications so you can stay up to uh date with all of these classes all right everyone let's get into some writing here we go so um ielts writing the writing section takes one hour task two is your second writing task of course it takes 40 minutes it is worth two thirds of your writing score so you want to make sure to spend 40 minutes on it and you want to start by reading the question really really really carefully because even with great english you will get a low mark if you are not writing an essay that is on topic and that addresses the question accurately for those high band scores the information matters a lot at band 6 6.5 they expect good grammar and vocabulary and for higher band scores they expect good information good ideas good flow of the essay good connection of ideas so that's what we're going to work on welcome jyoti hi learn english hi rashika um johanna javed good to see you in our general english health channel okay so let's do this let's read this question really really carefully and then we'll go through the correct steps to get those high band scores so ielts task to writing you should spend about 40 minutes on this task a lot of people who wanted to become professional athletes gave up this idea because of the fear of failure and parents pressure do you think that parents should support their children who want to do a career in sports support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience write at least 250 words now just a quick fyi for essays that get high high band scores like 789 they are longer than 250 words they're much closer to 300 350 words so the absolute minimum is 250 to get a decent score but to get those high band scores you need to write about 30 percent more words okay for further clarity so our first step what is it let's see who is up and awake with me early today or if in your country it's getting late who's still sharp even though it's late at night so what do you do you read the question what should you do this is a step that you need to regularly practice at home as well it's a very important step it's a critical part of learning rajvir says paraphrase it amu a tharwa and khyber all agree yeah you want to paraphrase it and good paraphrasing will have 90 accuracy with the content at least okay so make sure to have a good paraphrasing okay so let's do that let's paraphrase and i'll take a look at what you're doing hi dana over at general english help so please paraphrase this question i'm going to do the same we can just go word by word or phrase by phrase so many individuals instead of a lot of people so many individuals that desired to be a career sportsman or women quit their athletics since they wanted to avoid disappointment guardian expectation do you believe that parents should i support well no words coming to mind for support so i'm just going to type out support and i'm going to highlight the word support because i definitely want to learn some other ways to say support and in this case if i'm using microsoft word i can go to review and then review i can check my thesaurus now i know this is small that's what i'm telling you so thesaurus will give me some synonyms provision substance care funding backing maintenance backing encouragement help assistance aid um so let's go with encourage that's a good one okay so now again so their offspring who want to again i don't really know what uh another synonym is for want other than desire so i'm going to again check my thesaurus so i go to review thesaurus and uh there we have desire crave covet aspire so aspire is a good way to paraphrase want or desire so aspire to be professional athletes okay so a little bit of switching up of the words and there i have my paraphrasing okay so here is my original uh question a lot of people who wanted to become professional athletes gave up this idea because of the fear of failure and parents pressure do you think that parents should support their children who want to do a career in sports at home i want to reread the original question and then right away reread my paraphrase to make sure it makes sense and it's asking the same question many individuals that desire to be career sportsmen and women quit their athletics since they wanted to avoid disappointment and guardian expectation do you believe that parents should encourage their offspring who aspire to be professional athletes okay so that looks pretty good now never ever forget uh the end of the question and here that's support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience okay so you have to make sure and i highly recommend that at home when you're practicing to paraphrase this as well just so that you're focused on the actual question parameters and what kind of information you have to include okay all right so kyber writes many individuals abandon the motive of becoming sportsmen or women due to concerns of not succeeding and coercion of parents kyber that is beautiful paraphrasing good job good for you you are really improving in your english and that's going to pay you dividends later in life that's a fantastic paraphrase nicely done learn english says many individuals who wish to become professional sportsmen leave this thought because of inner obstacles and loss of apparent force learn english instead of loss and or inner obstacles and loss and parent parents force yeah learn english that's good parents put the apostrophe after the s so you're showing possessive for the plural of parents okay hi umrah and then learn english continues with do you believe that fathers and mothers should aid their kids who dream to become sportsmen very nice okay very nice paraphrasing notice viewers that so far we have three versions we have kyber we have learn english we have mine they all read different we're using lots of different vocabulary but it's all solid solid paraphrasing amu writes many individuals who have an interest of becoming an athlete quit from their profession due to the stress from parents and phobia of losing do you believe that parents should motivate their offspring who have a keen interest in sports as a career amu another beautiful paraphrase i can tell that many of you are practicing at home before the lesson and you're coming up with some really nice well-structured grammatically accurate sentences with great vocabulary very nice use of the word phobia amu phobia means fear and it's a professional way to express that so good job amu very nice okay mohammed javed says several individuals aspiring to opt for sports as their career quit this notion because they are afraid of failure and stress from their parents do you believe that parents ought to back up their offsprings in this aspiration or who want to become athletes muhammad over at general english help very nice paraphrasing as well okay so again even more variations and that's fantastic rajvir is coming up with another nice variation so as the english idiom goes there is more than one way to skin the cat it means that you should never think that oh there's no way to paraphrase this there are always ways to paraphrase the question and that will help you collect vocabulary collect ideas focus on the question now this is not necessarily your introductory paragraph this is simply a start to the essay to understand the ideas okay so you might use this later on at some point in your essay but don't think that this is your introduction okay so let's go to the next step the next step is identifying the topic and it's always a very important step to identify the topic to make sure that you're writing about the right idea if you're not writing about the right idea you're in trouble so what's the topic here okay so what are we actually uh talking about okay what do you think so if we look at this question what are we actually talking about okay what's the topic what's up for discussion if you will okay very very important that you can accurately identify that because there are so many cases where students write an essay and they're writing off topic they're not writing about the right idea and while we wait for some of our members to come up with the topic the next point is the controlling idea the controlling idea you can think about it like what about this topic so what specifically are we actually talking about this topic okay um yeah so janil says the topic here is to be a sports person as a career um jyoti agrees so athletic careers okay all right yeah let's see if anybody else has some other ideas i would say that the topic here is aspiring to be professional athletes so wanting uh to become a professional athlete that's what we're talking about so uh the desire to be a professional athlete okay and june agrees to lead a career in athletics okay yeah we're talking about professional athletics as a career choice okay very good uh sorry i wrote that in the controlling idea let's just move that to the topic all right and um the controlling idea so what about this so what about this concept of wanting to be a professional athlete okay uh rashika says parents pressure for choosing athletic careers um rashika that would be your controlling idea i hope that that's what you're thinking as well so um should it be encouraged by parents yeah so absolutely so should this be encouraged by parents so should parents say hey that's a great idea son or daughter uh you should become a professional athlete i'm going to do everything in my power to make that dream become a reality for you absolutely okay all right um so now once we have the topic and the controlling idea uh we want to think critically about these points okay that's your next step right so step three okay because step one was paraphrasing step two was identifying the topic and the controlling idea and step three is to think critically so ask what why how about each of these topic and controlling idea okay so ask what why how now when you're at home you want to do this on pen and paper or on your computer and you want to actually write these down so that you're training your thinking to do this quickly in the ielts exam you're likely not going to have enough time to plan it all on paper in such detail but you're basically going through the same steps in your head just much much faster in the matter of four or five minutes at most so that you have 30 minutes to write and you have another five minutes to review when you're going for a band 9 that's the ideal now i know some students are like oh but i have trouble in 40 minutes just finishing my essay in 250 words that's fine but you can't just focus on writing in the 40 minutes okay so in reality to get those high band scores and i made some of these mistakes when i actually sat my ielts exam as well so in reality you have to for ielts task 2 spend 5 minutes planning spend 30 minutes writing and then spend another five minutes reviewing okay that's what you have to do all right that's the path to a band eight band nine for sure okay asthma welcome back to our group of members okay so let's ask why how uh so what does it mean to aspire to be a professional athlete okay so what does that mean what does it mean that uh a person growing up says hey i want to be a professional athlete in your opinion how would you define uh that okay and rajvir is seconding that that what does it mean to aspire to be a professional athlete okay and think simple here so thinking simple is not always easy but you want uh to think simple and the other point that's important here is you want to think concise so when you're thinking about the topic the controlling idea these what why how's you want to come up with ideas that are short and accurate okay all right shahir ali says handling pressure that's a part of it okay that's a part of it um but i would define it a little bit differently shaheer okay enough preet says their individual interest what do you mean by that enough preets so you need to be a little bit more specific kyber says a desire to become a professional athlete means that one wishes to play for their country in a respective sport i'm not sure kyber i don't think i would define wanting to be a career athlete in that sense okay i would define it differently jyoti says dedication on a particular sport um again i don't know jyoti if i would say that that's the most accurate definition asma says career athletes are those who are into athletics as their job monetary wise no other business besides it okay asma i don't know about the last part about no other business but definitely you're on the right path there is a monetary gain here okay uh june says work as a full-time athlete working for a specific team or club doing daily training participating in a series of sports events like the olympics okay i think june that you're going too far down the rabbit hole so you're thinking about too many details i would make that i would answer this a little bit differently i would say okay um so this is how i would define what it means to want to be a career athlete to invest time and effort to get played uh for playing a sport okay um that's uh what i would say what it means to be a professional athlete um okay so that's i think the most accurate definition at the end of the day professional athletes get paid uh so that they can afford their living expenses et cetera and um that's what it means okay uh yeah rajvir that's more accurate it's rajvir says individuals who desire to choose to play sports for financial support and for sustenance okay um why do people want to become a professional athlete let's answer that so now comes the why question right okay so why does a person um want to become a professional athlete why does somebody want to become a world-class footballer or swimmer or tennis player okay enough preet is asking read my above statement muhammad says choosing sports to earn a livelihood yeah absolutely okay enough preet says they're interested in sports and they want to pursue them as a career and win name and fame um enough preet you're answering more the why question i'm not sure if that's why you wanted me to uh to read your above statement but i think that's more of the why question and it's a common mistake students for individuals to confuse the what question with the why question so that's one of the points that you really want to focus on uh getting good at when you're practicing this is to not confuse what why and how questions okay uh amus says professional athletes are those who have a natural interest and competitive mind towards a sport they act as both a trainer and trainee for a particular sport um shaquille says because they want to get name and fame and monetary gain okay and shaquille you even made it rhyme so you get an extra bonus thumbs up for that because they want to get name and fame and monetary gain okay um muhammad says they follow footsteps of their sports idols i'm still i think we're still missing a very important reason why uh people want to become professional athletes and i think it's actually a critical reason for this essay to read well okay i don't think that um all professional i don't think that most professional athletes choose a sports career because they want uh fame and fortune okay all right i do believe that there's another primary reason okay um and it's not just mental and physical fitness gino okay i think that most people who start out um want to become a professional athlete and i'm still looking for it because i'm hoping that somebody will say this it's a little bit discouraging that nobody's coming up with this okay so this is what i would say for this all right um yeah so june because of an interest in a certain sport a passion for it that's right because they love that certain sport okay i'm gonna use june's here i think it's maybe a little bit better because they are passionate about a certain sport so i don't think you know a young child uh that starts out in playing football or tennis is really thinking about who i'm gonna be famous uh like uh ronaldo one day and make millions of dollars uh that might become a part of it and it might become a part later but i think that originally it's just they're really passionate about it they really enjoy uh doing it okay so that's that's why people want to become a professional athlete how do people become professional athletes okay so answer this one for me i'm going to do the same i think the how question is not too bad so once uh you're clear on the what question and the why question i think the how question uh somewhat comes naturally okay but i do think that this question is particularly important for uh this essay absolutely okay um so uh yeah muhammad i think that not sometimes but i think most of the time they're passionate i do think it's extremely difficult to become a professional athlete without being passionate uh being driven by money alone is usually not enough uh to become very good at something right because money is not always there okay so how does a person do it how does a person become a professional athlete so arguably a person becomes a professional athlete through having talent through lots of practice through getting support from their community and of course their parents and by getting recognition within that sport right as being somebody who is exceptional or unique right kyber i think you have something similar there training stamina natural talent okay and also sport recognition and support um so there are lots of uh athletes out there who are quite good in their sport but for some reason they don't make it big they don't have enough support they don't have enough recognition so it's a combination of those right it's going back to that question of parent support all right so now let's go through the controlling idea okay so um what does it mean to have a parental support to become a professional athlete and this is the controlling idea again very important to think about uh before you start writing the essay otherwise this essay could get really confusing and really disorganized really quickly so what does it actually mean to have the parental support to become a professional athlete okay what do you think i'm really curious about the answers that you'll come up with for this because i believe that there will be some uh differences here um so how would you define that how would you support how would you define the support of a parent for their child to pursue a career in some specific sport like baseball basketball football swimming running and so forth okay kyber says parents would provide financial assistance as well as motivation towards that sport and encouragement okay kyber i think you're on the right track uh shaquille says moral and monetary support from parents okay i think that's very good that's a very nice way to define it so moral and monetary support from parents on a regular basis right so um yeah definitely so sports cost money absolutely you often cost lots of money if anybody plans to come to canada and play hockey hockey is a very expensive sport all that equipment skates and protective gear and so on it's quite expensive money for travel to play against other teams and of course moral support moral support that's really good uh shaquille i love how you came up with that right so um that's definitely the right collocation moral support moral support means encouragement okay uh june says parents provide monetary support for the children's tuition training gym membership uh mental support by encouragement on daily communication that's right june uh june make sure you separate out the what and the how because you're kind of mixing it in so the how would be like children's tuition buying sports equipment and such so that's the how part of this okay uh the how part june you can think about it like a deeper kind of definition of the what concept okay enough preet says in terms of money overall encouragement and giving them the freedom to choose that career path okay why is it important so this is a great question because this is at the heart of this task too right is why are we even talking about this so why are we even talking about the need of parental support so why is it important to have parental support to become a professional athlete and i'm very curious how you will um answer this question so why is it important why why should we expect moms and dads to be like hey son you're doing a great job you're amazing oh good hit son good kick son good great goal son here's a hundred dollars to go buy yourself new soccer cleats um so why why is that important okay rajavir says to encourage children to follow their dreams yes okay chin tun i think that's for the last one supportive in terms of finance and mental health um moral support chintan would be more accurate to that just like shaheed said okay so why i'm going to give my idea and then let's see if you agree or come up with something different or something extra okay so all right um so far this is what i've come up with since children look up to their parents and excel when they gain encouragement from them right so um children uh definitely uh think of moms and dads as their heroes so um when they get that kind of encouragement then they're going to uh get a lot of energy and a lot of motivation to become successful and of course as we're just talking uh because sports are expensive right so sports require a lot of time and effort and money right harwinder says because by having it athletes don't have to worry about money for equipment and they stay motivated yeah harwinder that's i think the same idea from a different perspective june says it takes great effort to pursue a career in athletics since childhood without parental support it can be very difficult for children to keep up with day-to-day training absolutely june i agree yeah uh shaquille says parents are the backbone of children um shaquille i would actually say role models right so parents are role models for their children so we look at our parents to get an idea of how the world works okay and if the parents project that the world can work in terms of being a professional athlete then we tend to believe that and we tend to pursue it right so we tend to keep up with it okay very good all right nice work muhammad says to keep spirits high in times of failure and i think that's a really good point mohammed so that's a good additive point right um to stay motivated through challenging times absolutely so i think maybe muhammad you're doing some good visualization there where sometimes athletes get injured they get discouraged and if you have mom and dad there to keep you motivated to say hey you'll get better you'll get back on that horse you'll do even better next time then they're able to rebuild the spirit and that's a very important part of this process uh through the development of a professional athlete absolutely okay all right so nicely done okay um so let's uh let's go back to now the how question right and i think june's all given us all a little bit of an insight into this so how can parents motivate or support their children to become professional athletes now make sure you practice these questions at home so that they come quickly to your mind when you're going through these ideas in your real exam of course in the real exam you're going through these questions in your head and you're coming up with these questions and answers very very quickly okay so how can parents support their children uh to become professional athletes and by encouragement through communication and participation so simply telling the child that they're doing a great job showing up to their games clapping and cheering for their child when their child performs well or even when they perform poorly right so they can support their children through those methods and of course buying the necessary sports equipment okay great so we've done a great job here preparing again when you're at home what you should do at this point i highly recommend this is to read the original question and then read your planning okay so let's just do that now we haven't done this regularly and we should and as you can tell i'm going with a nice a smooth pace this class so that we can get a lot done here we go so this is the question a lot of people who wanted to become professional athletes gave up this idea because of the fear of failure and parents pressure this is just some background to the question this is nothing really with the question this is a this is the background to the question do you think that parents should support their children who want to do a career in sports okay uh topic aspiring uh to be professional athletes uh should this be encouraged by parents okay that's fine um and then my planning so what does it mean to be a career athlete to invest time and effort to get paid for playing sports why do people want to become professional athletes because they are passionate about a certain sport and for fame and fortune how does a person become a professional athlete through talent lots of practice support and recognition what does it mean to have parental support to become a professional athlete moral and monetary support from parents on a regular basis why is it important to have this support um because children look up to parents and excel when they have encouragement from them and because sports are expensive and to stay motivated through challenging times how can parents support their children to become professional athletes buying necessary equipment encouragement now after reading this i realize that i'm missing a crucial question and answer here okay what is that crucial question and answer that i'm missing so what's the question here that i'm really missing to have the right essay can anybody tell me that okay i have to be very careful here otherwise after reading my critical thinking and responses here i think that i'm really missing something to make this a good essay what is that yeah so rajvir says the opinion so after getting all of these ideas um the question that we haven't really answered here is should parents support their children to become uh professional athletes okay so we really haven't um haven't answered this question yet we have a lot of ideas around it but we haven't really gotten to the heart of this question uh so uh we should get to this question okay all right um and uh this is now getting into our thesis statement so at the same extent as answering this question we're also getting to step four which means composing the thesis statement okay the thesis statement is your argument of the essay that outlines your points clearly to the reader okay um so uh let's um uh let's answer this question okay so after thinking about this um do you think that parents should support uh their children to become professional athletes or they should say oh no honey you should become a doctor or a lawyer instead give me your thoughts let me know what you think let's see if we have agreement i'm going to write this thesis statement because i have some good ideas after this planning and you do the same and then we'll compare okay all right um this is my uh response to this okay uh let's see if you come up with the same so daniel says i believe that parents ought to support their children to become professional athletes as is the best way to aid their offspring both morally and financially okay i'm not sure janiel i think about where you're going with that essay okay enough preet says like name and fame financial benefits and more we're representing the country worldwide um okay um i kind of get where you're going with that enough preet khyber says i ascertain that guardians should support their offspring um for the motivation of becoming sportsmen and women due to motivation and better performance kyber you have some confusing phrasing there you have some repetition of uh words even though they're different word forms like motive motivation so you need to rethink it students it's really really important that you think simple when it comes to your thesis uh statement okay so you should think simple all right um this is what i came up with after thinking about all of this so parents should encourage aspiring children to become professional athletes as this leads to health and success so think about it a child who is playing sports and wants to become a professional athlete usually ends up being a very healthy child they're likely not going to do drugs when they're growing up they're doing regular exercise they're getting lots of physical fitness now let's not go for the other argument which is injury and so on because of course that can happen but we can definitely argue that there's a lot of health so instead of playing video games they go and practice football and so on so they become healthy even if they fail at becoming a career athlete they're going to be healthy individuals and aspiring to be a professional athlete will also lead the child to success so that can be success in becoming a professional athlete and if they don't become a professional athlete they often will still become very successful individuals and this is where visualization is really important right so why why do you think that i would say that so why would i say that a child who fails at becoming a professional career athlete can still become a very successful person in life so why why would i say that okay while you think about that i'll read some more thesis statements so harwinder writes certain parents have to encourage their children to become a dream athlete version of themselves um shaheed says parents can support their children by providing the equipment support to spending time with their children okay june writes in my opinion parents ought to encourage their offspring to pursue their career in athletics that this contributes to better future with better fitness and higher motivation june you have the right ideas but simplify okay your thesis should be as concise as possible rajvir writes parents should support their children to pursue a career in sports as it encourages kids to perform better in sports and leads to healthy lives okay rajvir not bad visualize your body paragraphs there i think it's going to be a little bit challenging to um create the clear body paragraphs from that okay learn english says i believe that parents should encourage their kids as this can make them a good player healthy both physically and mentally okay um so once we have all this we can get into the introductory paragraph okay and the introductory paragraph should have a hook background and thesis and now that i have all this planning i can do this nice and quick so my hook again is a simple sentence that um let's see here my camera might have gone off just a second everyone uh let me get the camera back online here i'm not sure what happened there all right just a moment the camera needs some encouragement as well that's kind of bizarre but give me a moment i'll get you back here in just a second so that we can get into this uh introductory paragraph all right and momento there we go all right so back we are okay give you a little bit of extra time to think about the hook all right so again the hook is something that's simple okay and it includes the topic so i'm going to write a hook here do the same so keep the hook simple and include the topic okay that's what's key here all right so all right so this is all i would do for my hook one two three four five six seven eight nine words okay so less than ten words less than ten words you're on the right track as long as you have uh the topic in there so many children dream of becoming professional athletes in adulthood so i'm introducing the topic and it's something that catches the reader because we can empathize with it empathize means that yeah at some point many of us have thought i'm going to be a professional basketball player that's what i thought anyway maybe you thought you'll be a professional tennis player okay so that's my hook there rajvir says aspiring to become a professional athlete is a common childhood dream uh rajvir you have the same hook as me just worded a little bit differently so good job okay you're on the right track all right now i'm going to write the background and um uh the background is really simple because you're just using what you've already planned right so like the definition of what it means to be a professional athlete okay okay okay so this is simply like why am i writing this so fast well it's simply already in my planning so youth are often passionate about a sport and want to practice and play regularly to gain fame and fortune through talent and hard work okay so here i'm just simply defining what it takes to become a professional athlete all right now the importance of the question so parental support is important for both financial and moral reasons all right and then simply i put in my thesis okay so here uh my thesis statement is this in step four i'm just going to copy that over and boom there we go all right now before i read the paragraph i'm going to read the original question one more time and then i'll read my introductory paragraph to make sure that it makes sense okay so a lot of people who wanted to become professional athletes gave up this idea because of the fear of failure and parents pressure do you think that parents should support their children who want to do a career in sports support your point of view and with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience and experience it should be okay so here we go uh many children dream of becoming professional adults or professional athletes in adulthood youth are often passionate about a sport and want to participate and play regularly to gain fame and fortune through talent and hard work parental support is important for both financial and moral reasons parents should encourage aspiring children to become professional athletes as this leads to health and success now this is a first person essay because it's um asking for my opinion so i'm going to make sure that i include that okay i believe that and instead of parents repeating that i'm going to paraphrase that with moms and dads and if i want to be a bit more professional mothers and fathers okay and now i'm happy with this introductory paragraph now it's on the right topic right controlling idea there's clear direction and i can definitely see my body paragraphs the health and success okay all right um so that is uh my introductory paragraph and the body paragraphs and the conclusion uh we will write in tomorrow's class okay um so hopefully everybody got that and everybody saw how i put that introductory paragraph together um so make sure that uh you do the same okay at home and i'll review some of your body or sorry i'll review some of your introductory paragraphs at the start of tomorrow's class okay try not to make it exactly the same as mine so it doesn't have to have the exact same words especially but it doesn't have to have the exact same content either so you can word it a little bit differently all right you can have a little bit of a different concept going into this that's fine all right okay uh athar was looking for a speaking partner so members if you want to hook up with the tharwa and practice some speaking uh help out there okay uh unveit i'm glad you like that introductory paragraph uh we'll pick it up from here tomorrow remember viewers to learn lots about the writing uh section of the ielts exam and the correct strategies to get good band scores just make sure to visit us at ae help dot com for academic 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