IELTS Live - Task 2 Writing and Planning for Band 9

ielts class my name is adrian and i'm streaming to you from beautiful victoria here on the west coast of canada i hope everybody is having a lovely week so far i hope you're all healthy and strong and staying productive welcome gino welcome bandicha hi everyone we are looking at an ielts writing task 2 we're planning for a band 9 essay and we're going to be working on the planning and the introduction to this essay in this class because that's very very important so if you want to get a band 9 if you want to go past that band 6 pass that band 7 this is what you need to do you need to plan the essay and you need to understand the correct strategies and steps to essay writing hi raj students this is a members chat class of course everybody is welcome to watch if you'd like to become a member of our channel just click the join button next to the subscribe button and good news uh general english help channel viewers we will have memberships coming to our general english health channel as 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background again this big red button here again it's a one-time payment for lifetime access uh welcome to our new members by the way i see that there are a couple of new members joining us today as well which is fantastic good to see you all right everyone uh so getting into uh the lesson a little bit more um for questions uh send us an email adrianahelp.com if you send us your writing we can give you a band score estimate for free we can tell you where you are roughly hi jyoti welcome to the class um we will have a speaking class after this one in about 90 minutes where everybody will be able to join the chat we'll have more speaking and some reading later on in the week all right everyone so um we're going to get into today's writing and i figured that um today just before we look at our task two question i would uh give you a little bit of kind of a tip a side note a little bit of like i don't know you could call it a trick but i think it's just clarity for writing for those of you who are confused by this i know i am i get confused by this sometimes even after many many years of writing english so we're just going to look at these two interesting abbreviations that are commonly used in writing the ie and the eg um members have you seen these in writing before the ie and the eg many people have seen these and i think there's a lot of confusion about what these actually are and how they're actually used and sometimes native speakers and non-native speakers use these in their writing and these are useful for task one and task two um especially if you use them correctly they can even get you some points for lexical resource and cohesion but if you use them wrong then it's really really confusing welcome to our group of members nolan and i was kind of looking at this and i thought hey it'd be kind of fun to make this clear for everybody so i thought i'd go over these um these are actually coming from latin so anybody who's speaking spanish or french or latin based languages they're like aha okay i get it and there's an important difference okay so keep this in mind that there's a big difference um with these okay all right hi nolan welcome to our group of members that's awesome okay um so uh let's just go over this this is just kind of a fun note um take note of this remember this for your exam so the abbreviation abbreviation and means we take the first letter of a word okay [Music] um so i e here students i.e when you have i dot e and you're you're going to see this in writing often times and it's good to learn this um stands for ed est okay ed s again coming from latin um so it asked jyoti says means that is yeah and you're right um and when you think about that is right like some of you are probably like what does that mean that is right can anybody paraphrase that is so paraphrasing is a very important skill on the ielts and in writing um how could you paraphrase that is in this context can anybody tell me what is it what does it actually mean so when we say id s or that is and we use this kind of ie in writing what does that mean okay let me know what you think a good paraphrase for that is and then the opposite or while not the opposite but the kind of the the different expression that's often confused is the abbreviation e g okay and a lot of people think that means example given which it kind of does but it's actually still latin it means exempli gratia so example gratia meaning for example and a lot of people think that ie also means for example but it really doesn't okay so ie does not mean for example okay yeah june very good to be specific or to be more specific exactly that's what it means okay so to be specific very good june exactly or more specifically okay so that would be another way to say that okay um and then the abbreviation eg means uh for example which of course many of you know means like for instance okay so in your writing task too like in body paragraphs um when you're when you want to say for example you can actually even shorten that to eg okay and here are the examples that show you the difference here okay so this would be like a sentence where you would use this one meal i.e breakfast is included in the price of the room okay so here we have i e and then in this next example here i've taken kind of the same or similar content and used eg so one meal eg breakfast lunch or dinner is included in the price of the room so um here i just kind of added lunch or dinner to make it clearer but that could be hidden so it could be like that too okay now let's say you're traveling somewhere of course you're using english you're traveling to another country and you read this about the hotel that you're going to right there's a really important difference in the first one can you get lunch in the price of the room so in this one here can you get lunch with the price of the room [Music] so in the first example if i go to this hotel and i read this brochure or this advertisement and says one meal i.e breakfast is included in the price of the room and i go and i try to get my free lunch or i try to get my free dinner are they going to give me a free dinner or a free lunch uh carolina says no yeah exactly they will not okay so um that's the important difference here in the meaning so here it's basically that is or to be more specific breakfast is included in the price of the room it's only breakfast that's included okay in the second example where it says one meal eg breakfast lunch or dinner is included in the price of the room it's going to be one of those meals so any one of those meals okay so that's the important difference between ie and eg they do not have the same meaning they're used differently okay so when you use them in your writing it's good just make sure you use it correctly if you don't use it correctly the examiner catches it they're going to like em but if you use it correctly they're gonna be like uh-huh okay this student is awesome okay um so does everybody understand that everybody clear on the difference between ie and eg give you some thumbs up and then we'll go on to today's task two question and we're gonna get rocking and rolling and moving along step by step to develop our introductory paragraph okay um carolina it doesn't necessarily mean that it's for one item it just means to be specific so anytime carolina that you want to express to be specific or more specifically you use ie in this case i used it for this example but it doesn't necessarily have to be used for one specific item it could be used for a group of items for instance okay all right um good so we've got some thumbs up everybody's good on the ie and the eg awesome um we're going to circle back to that later when we're in the body paragraphs tomorrow so remember this kind of starting tip for today's lesson okay nolan nice of you to get in there with the thumbs up okay students so here's our ielts task to question of the day and um when you are getting to the task two question make sure to read it really slowly and really carefully okay so i'll task to writing read this slowly don't rush it if you understand the question incorrectly you will do horribly on this writing essay and it will have a terrible effect on your writing score so read it slow and careful slow and careful okay here we go so you should spend about 40 minutes on this task make sure to spend 40 minutes many people think that technology is the solution to major world problems such as pollution others feel it is more important for people to change their behaviors and consume less discuss both sides always really pay attention when it says this because you have to discuss both sides for task completion and give your own opinion use examples from your own experience to support your position write at least 250 words at least means minimum so that means that if you don't write 250 words you're losing marks for task completion if you write 250 words you're much better off but it still doesn't mean you're getting a great score you have to have good content and that means often writing closer to 300 words okay so the first step is to paraphrase the question just so you make sure you understand it clearly and you get some good vocabulary now paraphrasing the question is not your introduction okay so this is not and i i know a lot of members already know this because i say it every time but the reason that i keep saying this is not your introduction is because so many students still think that all you need for an introduction for the ielts essay is to paraphrase the question no that's a band six maximum of band 7 if you write a perfect essay okay but it's not the best way to get high band scores all right so paraphrase the question this is not your introduction this is simply to gather vocabulary to help you think um to make sure that you understand it clearly okay so um a lot of individuals believe that all right so while you're doing your paraphrasing i'm doing mine and i'm going to go step by step and explain it for you so here i have many people think that technology is the solution you can go word by word when you're first doing this so i wrote a lot of individuals many people think uh believe that technology technology is basically innovation so it's new kinds of inventions new types of gadgets so that innovation innovation means like new ideas new inventions okay that inventions are the fix is the solution are the fix or is the fix maybe no innovations plural right so are the fix um two and then you can go phrase by phrase so you can look at an entire phrase like major world problems such as pollution and instead of major world problems i said many of the global challenges and instead of pollution i said such as environmental degradation degradation is kind of like destruction so destroying or unbuilding of the environment okay all right um so that's my first sentence paraphrased let me read that to you as a whole sentence so the original sentence reads many people think that technology is the solution to major world problems such as pollution and then my paraphrase is a lot of individuals believe that innovations are the fix to many of the global challenges such as environmental degradation now paraphrasing um is not a waste of time because these sentences will become useful in your essay and again they will help you understand the question and write clearly okay so others feel that it is more important for people to change their behaviors and consume less okay so opponents right because it's other people ascertain ascertains kind of a fancy word to say feel that it is more vital instead of important vital vital means important for life uh that it is vital for humans to alter their routines and decrease consumption okay so i'm changing the grammar there express both views and provide your own perspective okay use instances from your own life to strengthen your opinion so i've gone and paraphrased the whole question okay and that's really good to do because that way you're going to have clarity you know exactly what you need to do and you're going to be much much better off okay all right so um here's my full paraphrase uh we've got lots of others paraphrasing now in the chat which is um uh fantastic okay and i see that nabin um had some good answers there for eg as well it's very good okay um so here's the original um sentence or here are the original sentences many people think that technology is the solution to major world problems such as pollution others feel that it is more important for people to change their behaviors and consume less discuss both sides and give your own opinion use examples from your own experience to support your position okay so for me this means a lot of individuals believe that innovations are the fix to many of the global challenges such as environmental degradation opponents ascertain that it is more vital for humans to alter their routines and decrease consumption express both views and provide your own perspective use instances from your own life to strengthen your opinion okay i think they both kind of say the same um so june writes numerous individuals ascertain that technological advancements play an important role in resolving the prevalent global issues like environmental degradations while other people believe that these problems can be better addressed if the populace adjusts their behavioral habits by reducing their consumption on natural resources okay very good june june work on making it concise okay so a bit shorter like you can just say adjust their habits instead of behavioral habits you don't need behavioral okay habits are behaviors especially if you say humans okay so keep it concise okay concise jyoti right certain individuals ascertain that telecommunications mitigate worlds prime issues like adulteration opponents believe that it is inhabitants who have to alter their attitudes and limit to dominate um jyoti it almost reads like you're using um a piece of software to translate it or something uh it's quite off it there seems to be quite a few awkward um incorrect words there so you want to retry that it's very confusing for me like telecommunications refers to telephones and radio towers so it doesn't really make sense here okay so you've got to rewrite that jyoti all right maul says the majority of people believe that more technological advancement is the likely way of solving um pollution uh crisis okay maul it's a not a bad start you want to continue with that rahul preet says most individuals ascertain that a.i is the solution to global challenges like environmental detriment on the contrary people think that changes in habits and less consumption will fix these problems uh rahul preet um careful not to pigeonhole yourself okay so technology doesn't just mean a.i um ai is simply artificial intelligence but we're talking about technology in general not necessarily just ai okay so students when you're paraphrasing check your paraphrasing make sure the words are correct make sure you're being accurate okay all right um so what's the topic here what are we talking about everyone always identify the topic step two clearly identify the topic before you start writing if you start writing without identifying the topic you are in a very very very dangerous situation to get a low band score because you're going to write off topic or you'll have a low quality essay it'll be poor so you have to really focus and make sure that you clearly identify the topic okay so clearly identify the topic before you start writing when you are thinking about the topic simply ask yourself the question what are we specifically discussing in this essay okay so uh jynil says global problems i disagree jainal it's not global problems it's maybe part of it okay so no it's not global problems you have to be a little bit more accurate than that janil but good try okay uh jyoti says world's major problems yeah okay we've got the right topic by june okay um june says solutions okay and it's not just solutions um but it's like the solution right so um solutions yeah rajvir sings as ways to fix global problems yes um more specifically when you're presented with two sides here um you can't and you you can you could introduce a third side because it says give your own opinion but i don't recommend doing that in the ielts i recommend sticking to just the two sides that they present so technology and or behavior as uh the fix or as the solution to global problems okay um yeah so all of you are talking about you know or you're saying the topic as the solution or the fixes to global problems you're right um to be more specific uh you can even just focus on the two sides that are given here um so you can focus on this uh let's choose a different color here you can focus on this technology and or behavior as the solution to global problems okay that's the topic that's what we are talking about okay all right um and the controlling idea here so more specifically um is uh the uh correct uh solution to global problems okay um and of course the reasons all right so that would be it all right um so uh let's get into some what why how questions that's the next step so some quick critical thinking okay and you know you don't have to just think about one what question or one why question when you're doing this in the ielts exam it's good to have lots of these what why how questions going through your head they have to be correct questions um but they have to be the right questions okay so we want to ask the right questions here okay so the first question that i would ask here is what solutions does the technology um provide okay so that would be my first question that i would ask myself all right um so give me some ideas here students um what um what solutions does technology provide and lewis says how to solve global problems lewis try not to approach it from a question perspective but from a statement perspective like solutions to global problems for the topic so always approach the topic not from the question but from the statement okay so write this as a statement right okay so what solutions does technology provide um okay efficient use of energy like solar panels okay um or for example recycling okay uh metal and glass okay so i'm kind of answering the how question here as well um yeah so harwinder says clean energy without using fossil fuels yeah exactly so i like to go always with the positive side harwinder so instead of saying without using positive uh without using fossil fuels i want to say efficient use of energy like solar energy or wind energy okay so recycling like metal and glass technology to clean up the environment there's a lot of great technology emerging to help clean the environment as well okay so absolutely all right so june says air and water purif purifiers filters purifiers yep absolutely okay um and then why uh does technology focus on this and then of course the answer is uh humans uh have uh polluted the land uh water and air and we can just stop there okay all right um now uh we could take the other side of this right so um what kinds of uh behaviors can help to fix world problems now when the question gives you the one problem as an example like pollution you should focus on that in your essay so don't start talking about different kinds of problems like economy and war and such but focus on the one that is given to you by the question okay so if the question says pollution then focus on pollution in your essay you're not writing this for university it's not 10 pages long so you don't really have time to go off on different kind of concepts okay all right so what kinds of behaviors can help fix world problems okay so let's say uh uh reusing um materials like a coffee cup okay uh what else so what kinds of behaviors buying less merchandise focus on needs not wants okay um gineal says not using plastic bags using uh paper or cloth bags yeah not using plastic bags sure okay um so again you don't have to go uh too far here okay all right so um we're almost there but before we can write our thesis so that's going to be step four is to write the thesis it's the sentence that explains your argument right about my head there so before we write our thesis statement okay thesis statement's going to be very very important but before we do that um we need to ask another question what is that question so i don't want to rush here if i were to write my thesis right now then um [Music] then i'm going to miss a very important point for this essay so that i can get that really high band-aid band 9. so what is that question okay asking good questions is super super important in the ielts so you have to ask a good question here what is that good question we're missing one really important key question here uh to make this essay great um what is that question okay carolina says how uh not quite carolina because today i'm kind of going a little bit faster so showing you how to combine the how and the the what why so when i say coffee cup or reusable coffee cup or not using plastic bags that's kind of the how question okay so rajvir says my opinion which is better between these two so it's on the right track but it's not the exact question i'm looking for rajvir okay so yeah don't forget about your opinion um which side do you agree with okay um that's you're thinking correctly rajvir however it's not quite the question now you have to think about the question so what is the question that we want to ask here so mr rahul preet is asking another question that's also on the right track rahul pride is asking can both technology and behavior help with reducing the problem yep so your brains are kind of working in the right sphere or in the right area of the question um but uh you're not there yet okay you're not there yet and whether or not you agree with one side or both sides depends on this answer okay so the question that i'm thinking of would be why are both of these solutions considered for fixing global problems so that would be my question okay so what you should be thinking of here is why why is this question asking me uh technology and behavior so why is it presenting me with both of these solutions suddenly so what's the logic of the person or the exam maker in this case the ielts exam maker what's their logic of giving me both of these possible uh solutions so why why is that why now why like a hundred years ago you probably would not have heard both of these and then even like in let's say the 90s or at the start of the 2000s we often heard one but not the other like well people have to change their behavior or then you started to hear kind of people saying oh technology is becoming important for this so why are we nowadays hearing people talk about technology and behavior more and more often together when we're talking about world problems okay so why are we why are we considering both okay and i think that if you think about this you're going to come up with a very important answer which will make this essay a lot better and will help you to secure good content and a good opinion okay and i really want to write this and i'm like i'm very impatient i'm like i know the answer but i i think some of you will come up with the answer so carolina says because they can both be implemented and there's even a you're right carolina but there's even a better way to say that i would say because they both must be implemented okay rajvir says it is not possible to fix global issues by implementing one method only why okay now you're thinking right rajvir why um and june says because they're not um contradictory in fact they're complementary okay absolutely okay um so and our problems have become critical okay so uh pollution food supply fresh water fresh air um ozone layer these types of global warming these types of issues are becoming critical okay in fact there's some really negative thoughts out there that it's irreversible now even if we do implement both so the reason why we're discussing these is because we've gotten to a part of human history now where we have eight billion people and these problems are becoming critical okay so you can't just do a simple one method approach right and that's the thought that you have to come to okay so now we can write our thesis statement now we can write an effective thesis statement okay so i'm going to write my thesis statement you write a thesis statement then we'll take a look at it okay so okay so this would be my thesis statement here uh in my opinion both technology and behavior must be adapted to tackle global issues as the situation or as problems have i'm going to fix this a little bit as problems global problems have become critical and um these fixes are complementary okay just checking my parallel grammar there so in my opinion both technology and behavior must be adapted to tackle global issues as global problems i don't want to repeat global so as world problems have become uh critical and these fixes are complementary okay let's see what some of our students are coming up with uh mr rahul preet says according to me both technological advancements and changing human behavior can the people of the world to tackle global environmental issues uh like pollution yeah and that works um so rahul preet that will work because i can tell that in your first paragraph you're going to discuss um uh technological advancements and in the second one uh in a you're going to discuss human behavior and you're going to conclude and include your opinion that both of these are necessary so that works rahul pretty good okay bandita says in my view both technology and behavior need to be adopted to resolve global problems as they are a threat to mankind yeah bandita very good so nice i can see your position i can see where you're going with this nolan says in my point of view both technology and human behavior must be utilized for global issues as problems have become major and these need to be fixed yeah that works notice my corrections students as i'm reading your thesis statements very nice nolan okay june writes i believe that both technological innovations and people's actions are key to solving world issues as they both need to be implemented for um effectiveness okay you don't need to say better effectiveness just effectiveness june okay janniel says i think that both technology and human habits are uh vital solutions to fixing global problems because they must be needed for efficiency and outcomes okay for positive if uh for positive efficiency and outcomes okay something like that janelle for the end okay uh me yen in my point of view the best solution to effectively solve uh global issues are both human behavioral and behavior and technological advancements as they are complementary very good in the end so again a couple of key corrections there but you're definitely on the right track all right great job students so now we can start our introductory paragraph okay so you're all on the right track now we can start our introduction introductory paragraph okay it has three parts a good introductory paragraph has three parts a hook background and thesis okay your hook is a simple um sentence that introduces uh the topic okay um and uh keep it simple and make it interesting let it catch your reader so again when we hop back up here the topic here is technology and or behavior as the solution to global problems okay so just like this there is much debate in the world whether uh technology or uh behavior technological i want to paraphrase or i want to be parallel grammar right away from the beginning whether technological advancement or human behavior are the key to solving world issues okay so um that is my hook it's a little bit long in this case maybe somebody will give us a more concise shorter hook if you go with a little bit of a more shorter general hook like it is important to find solutions to major world problems before it's too late that could be a good one as well okay so so you could go with something really short like this this would still be um quite accurate to the topic and definitely very powerful to catch uh the audience so it is vital to find solutions to world problems before human extinction ooh okay that would really catch um the reader's attention right most people of course fear human extinction so that would work well janeille writes nowadays people are taking care of mother earth through technology and behavior okay that would be good janil as well so you're going for the positive side so now people uh care for mother earth by technology and behavior okay we can simplify that even more gineal all right and then we want to write the background right so the background means like what are the definitions and why are we discussing this so certain innovations and habits are targeting challenges such as pollution and overpopulation to ensure the survival of our species these issues must be addressed effectively okay so there's my background simply explaining what we're talking about and why we're talking about it uh welcome treng and welcome babu to our group of members by the way it's fantastic uh to have you on board so [Music] here is uh my introduction so far it is vital to find solutions to world problems before human extinction certain innovations and habits are targeting challenges such as pollution and overpopulation to ensure the survival of our species these issues must be addressed effectively and then um i can just put my thesis in there in my opinion both technology and behavior must be adapted to tackle global issues as world problems have become critical and these fixes are complementary okay um and now my thesis is a little bit redundant because of my background so i can change this a little bit um and take out some of the repetitive words okay all right so simplifying making it concise the more you can say with less words the higher your band score okay all right mal says the world needs technology combined with individual responsibility to tackle these issues efficiently as quickly as possible okay all right yep absolutely janel let's put a comma in there okay all right so this is my introductory paragraph um it is vital to find solutions to world problems um before human extinction certain innovations and habits are targeting challenges such as pollution and overpopulation to ensure the survival of our species these issues must be addressed effectively in my opinion both technology and behavior can be adapted to tackle world problems as these fixes are complementary all right so i have the words world problems here i have challenges i have issues um [Music] so instead of world problems i can say worldly difficulties okay as these fixes are complementary and now i have a nice clean introductory paragraph with all of the elements okay rahul preet says we could say worldwide problems okay yeah so keep looking for those paraphrases um i could also just uh use my thesaurus review uh you might not see this but um uh the thesaurus will help me out here um disputes contests arguments experiments encounters no not quite okay so i'll leave it as is and now i'm happy with my introductory paragraph and i can write my body paragraphs and my conclusion based on my thesis statement okay um students so that's how you want to start your task too and you want to do that quickly okay so basically it should only take you um about six seven minutes to get to this point how do you do it very simply okay so first you read the question in 30 seconds uh ielts writing task two you should spend about 40 minutes on this task many people think that technology is the solution to major world problems such as pollution others feel that it is more important for people to change their behaviors and consume less discuss both sides and give your opinion use examples from your own experiences to support your position then you write the paraphrase a lot of individuals believe that innovations are the fix to many of the global challenges such as environmental degradation opponents ascertain it is more vital for humans to alter their routines and decrease consumption express both views and provide my perspective use instances from my life topic we're talking about technology and or behavior as solutions to problems why are we discussing both of these because the problems have become critical and we need effective solutions quickly what are some technological solutions to these problems more efficient use of energy uh recycling of materials the filtering the cleaning of the air the cleaning of the ground and the water the ocean what kind of behavioral solutions are we talking about we're talking about recycling reusing for example reusable coffee cups paper straws okay and that's enough and i'll think about more as i'm writing but i want to get to that point and then i'm writing my introduction so then i write this paragraph and i'm off to the races all right so i just wanted to show you that when you're practicing this before your ielts and you're going through these steps one two three four each time you practice you're going to become very efficient once you get to your exam to create a powerful introductory paragraph okay all right um so me and is asking a question like if i say that i agree with one side does my essay get a lower mark not necessarily me and you could make a one-sided argument that's a good question you could make a one-sided argument like you could say that it has to be human behavior because there are simply eight billion people and it's only through behavioral changes that humans have a chance to save the world you could make a good argument for that as well but it just might be a more challenging essay especially to get a high band score if you take one side so you could get a bad nine if you just choose one side and you focus on it but it could become more challenging okay you have to come up with some really clever ideas um your goal in the ielts meehan is to get a high band score so you want to choose the easiest path to the band nine for this question the easiest path would be to say that both are important for fixing world problems okay jedrick welcome to our group of members it's jedrick alexis kyle c garcia welcome um it's just at the end of the class but worry not everyone we will continue tomorrow from this point we're going to continue with the body paragraphs and the conclusion and we're going to use some of that ie and eg in tomorrow's class for those body paragraphs so come back then but don't go too far because we have an ielts speaking class coming up for everybody that will be a part one speaking and we're going to be looking at questions that are similar to some ielts questions that were on the exam last month okay so these will be kind of interesting in this way so make sure to come back in half an hour and that will be for everybody okay so everybody will be able to join in on this chat and i will be calling students to speak with them and analyze their ielts speaking responses so thank you carolina for moderating the class thank you to all of our new members who joined i believe we had about four or five new members join this class that's fantastic again students remember aehelp.com for academic ielts giltshelp.com for general outs use the code r4tyj for that 20 discount um the websites our websites look like this click this red button um this is a one-time payment for lifetime access husna says that was so fast i know husna when you're having fun time flies we're here for a whole hour right it's fast for me too like i don't i'm like wow that was an hour um but yeah that was an hour so you're very welcome harwinder and again for academic ielts everybody um you want to use this website here let me just get out of my 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