Redundancy Error - Sentence Correction Tips - CSE and UPCAT Review

a few days ago I posted this questions I think Instagram story and I know most of you said no my money is a sentence better when I ask cool young male that is when the problem started that's what you're going to talk about today [Music] hi there did you like my new intro if you miss the old intro I'm really sorry I'm just trying to change the things up just in response to a few of you guys who complained I'm have my intro but just a quick little anecdote I want to thank Francis for giving me this shirt this girl can this is going to be high up on my list of favorite shirts right now it's something that I will try to live out dance I think moving now today really talk about the redundancy error to set this correction this is one of the errors the lagging Union is a spotlight not Natick Malfi Lupino that is why I decided now if I go and not enough you sound full no video at all now I also made an exercise for this okay then link will be in the description box below that is going to be from you adding team like a common a website you're going to answer that after you watch this video so don't forget to watch the entire video first now in order for me to explain this better and with switch work my PC I can show you how to do it I'll see you in a bit alright so when you encounter a question like this exam do you really know wanting male most people would look at you manga and says oh hey you must subject-verb agreement and then eventually come Walla Hanukkah Keaton anything wrong we would just say no error but if you notice right here a man a man young ordered Ito I'm on I'm on your package Allegheny imagine converging MI and lahat Apogee modelling John is this sparked I hear letter C anomaly Jan you'll repeat the question again let me show you why that's wrong okay repeat it because I've been elite in Menasha so when you say again I miss I mean be known and hold it in motion this is what we call redundancy error now before we go on let me just define muna original redundancy Sabina Merriam Webster's dictionary redundant is an adjective it means exceeding what is necessary or normal visa being against mob Rehanna be not only taught it motion and when it comes to English grammar Heaney maganda England if anything doesn't add to the Senate sentence a big Sabean Hindi Shahi lon initially logon ke LAN Xiao Angeline okay now it's characterized by or containing and excess so if we submit again using more words that necessary anything the hindi naman theta and pattern and don't I pay table Pangolin so if you ever experienced you remarried on dates office you 13 and gurgling you know if you say me hain koun it how I met on Kanagawa neguin I got any BA you're working on the same job at Hindi demand Kayla and I don't know why am I going on ready can't angle insert Abajo Union yeah talking in an area done deep sea redundant no young position I own okay after you Mahalo gay putting the Phoenician Oh longer needed for a job and hence laid off so again but he can he likes me even a manga mantra by homo redundant redundant your position I own so you need a Highland onion ready national angle in so again the bridge redundant means something an outlet which means the same name DK lands a song sentence now some purpose of yet biosimilar Filipinos medic ties among adjectives medic tiresome our words not about a sentence and that's a common mistake whether you're starting out or Akuma Darlington among English or even kite ma professional in the writers that's a first sin I hope personally India immune Jen I also do that Latin if I want to emphasize a point I end up doing numeral done in Sierra now walk if I feel like I want to emphasize something mean son he gonna pop and saying you adjectives but an ergonomic go at you now in itself iPad I wanna be Sabine or you and Alabama considered an adjective gonna need any visa be here now it's all about adjectives on ABC bohemian it's a word that describes another word or corn ammonia solution Danny I can describe something else so again if you definition are adjectives I'm gonna do say no say no some danyoung is that an adjective or noun then it will say be he known it is already here than that now the best way for me to show you this is to actually give you an example so let's look at this sentence right here now what's wrong with this and normally if it was a sentence NATO una Sal had like I tell my students Capilouto to Rocco now amongst objects I don't if they're writing paper so if I'm teaching psych or business English or political science which I used to teach in college before I tell them about using a cervical 3 line rule three line rule is if the sentence is long so long too long actually now mob unless you set up long lines when you're typing in some word or iguana when you're opening it again Brittany to write your paper usually my money in a ton and that also applies here if you notice and haba haba no sentence I'm sorry we don't allow and give permission to your past history to completely destroy your coming future now anomaly detour again as Filipinos and as readers of a second language or type named a there's this feeling Asuna the longer the sentence the better it is kappa no kappa muhabba in sentence ladonna if we're talking about Sabrina teen compositions or Yuma ET writing classes in an erratic were you know 500 to 700 words right when we're giving her given assignments sabine say you know okay longhand 500 for seven or eight words in kappa ahahah machado Mesabi you end up doing this you end up adding nappy-nap ahaab and when you sentence de yada hi dharmasya sabe for example in here Angela sobbing along is well mother higher and I'm past more I said I knew in future ah hell I'm haba haba no potaka sobbing yeah some people get impressed about a while how about a man a sentence and a minimal seen Abby when in fact it's actually wrong bucket the wrong let me break this down for you let's start with this first part right here sabe don't allow and give permission to now I know maybe Sabina allow when we use the word allow on ABC being an ax in itself is to give permission right they mean the same thing okay there are synonyms and it be some hidden or neither man synonyms cousin in a man word one word no but basically they are equivalents but I also say Lanai because I'd be here when you allow someone to do something you're giving them permission so an IV semi he known the helper ation in exhibition Hindi Mezzaluna Hakka Doug Doug don't say sentence okay so you have to choose Cooney edit mode angle in Manila so instead of using don't allow and give permission to you need to take out one of those so for example don't allow any complaint Oh don't allow your I thought I so again this part right here that entire part is already done then see error in Deena hi Langan hello Anton gallon okay if I don't Cebu hide anybody from Iman manga by Hagi Cebu hi done that I'm bagging he demanded a line and you know how to long or narcotic paid in your song angling at the last I mean sign okay Tao okay maybe Savino condition I'll a Venetian a cartoonish narcotic dad one motion infinity entangle in motion the sentence okay now Simon don't allow upon Karina ten talk but in your sentence your past history now this part right here I see this happen all the time I've seen a lot of people do this actually in decoding masturbating in every question ago uh I mean look you know how about a call at and tweets Co or posts cause since I started using social media I probably also made this error term redundancy Araneta is very very simple I am adding an Indian a pop and same bucket cuz he um passed when we talk about past it already means your history they mean the same thing again because he will end among legged in a history in didn't get is a pass at lab nominal history mo in an eraser past so any Savina you can you can just choose one of those things in email a vanilla guy para OS on Cilla okay vamos in a banana Quran okay I don't need a file around above I didn't uh Sabine I know how to add so you have to choose one word again either would work by the missus okay iris having a dog allow your past by some people in what anger in Muncie history many many salmon don't allow your history where he Neiman are inviting even a new past so again we're editing editing an IP level was happen either but again if big long thing and you need money and apartments in so again that's another error now looking at your next partner Santana and possible to completely destroy your coming future now there's another redundancy period it on any map and seen in a on completely destroy now back it say when you see destroy on ABC behind onion is to completely ruin something so then word not destroy itself already built in a means completely okay I know a visa be he not get a gun there is a pattern higher key of words for example when you talk about damage okay this is a mine or never so Nang destroy no hey how do I explain that later for example Mademoiselle phone nella glad she resumed screen you screen long yeah omnibus ugh okay visa be he known that cellphone is damaged or a damaged no damage Shannon Allah glug Shah you know for example Marilyn cellphone a postman artillio okay Alicia immunity leo shot an eye on a basic basic nut Sarah serenella hat okay so a new more spring ninja named Athena who Elena drug drug nyan young screen eun-young destroy you cannot use destroy come screen lie on the burner damage or coming until ominous era and ABC me he not built in a sober inner destroy nap again amid my an Amish a completely non pitaka serie a completely damaged completely wrecked okay so in Iman Highlands a bohemian Gretna completely destroy inulin was a built in nyan grain completely done so for example pack tsunami wanna completely destroy you're basically saying you come to completely completely damaged wait completely completely destroyed but in do Littman and I'm enumerate not completely so again it's a redundancy paid emotional angle in now canary damaged lung yunyoung gotta meet him word maja you can get away with completely better in this case nina predict I said this noon work in destroy gotta meet in malang come complete campaka see Dania okay I'm opening Sabina what's a kind of a shock okay which is actually the problem with our language because it's a Philippine Filipino language a Filipino cattle at night then we like repeating words for example boxy nabi manga niganda only BCBG non-hindi column maganda maganda hapa sama ganda I'm gonna ganda mo I'm parrot parrot and galine galine so in the audit natin yung words to emphasize our point but in the English culture English language in all it more Malay redundant shy naive i or Nana gave to me because I be him no II sound weird so again this is something we need to unlearn and we need to be more careful of because a Hindi tie or Nisha natural sat-nav built-in site in New Guinea is a tin setting language that isn't a semantics at in Hindi automatic normally at Omaha megiddo so you have to be extra careful when you see parts of a sentence Nana underlines in your exam okay now here's another one did a sentence at all like the bat in a new ha it's unsettling an alum basis nullity and or LMSs khone laga you Maha redundancy errors just so you can notice an apparent means and hindi polish a pansy nyan for example coming future again same idea dance a past history bucket the future the future is coming miss ABN Heaney Mulholland Sabine you're coming I say in future built in nyan the Box mmm future Papa rotting padding along ha ok valise in every morning I mean young parroting nahin ahead up so any mana Vanessa beanie populating he died her up Milan I say my simple Asia so again simplicity is better after you kill anything matter to 9 so this is just an errand I in deep and seen any lag in a tent on yanagawa like adding the eating egg and sometimes we also feel but I'm impressed kappa gonna her in Italian Amata anima ramming fighting Iligan adjectives or adverbs not copper a ho but I'm aluminium aa paper me selected a pan bakla has no mana synonyms non word that is something that we need to be careful of ok now I'm going to challenge you with this this is just a sample actually I will include a link does a description box in a video NATO to an exercise posted satting websites at the WWWE mica calm so you can practice at home but this next slide I will give you three minutes to spot the errors in this next sentence but along the current very neuron in taste of quad nation aside we go deeper okay timer starts now you [Music] you [Music] you [Music] you [Music] alright let's see how you did so Sabol you thought a small dwarf or shockingly surprised by the evident appearance of the enormous giant so again same thing as canina okay I want you to spot all of the redundancies in this sentence again I added so much spiral arm up and senior Shah iPad among King at it the next time you see it okay so the first one is here the small dwarf bucket but see that be kissing dwarf automatic small nasha because I mean you don't need to say small anymore the dwarf is already small in itself so this is a redundancy error ready mock anger in your small the dwarf the lon the dwarf was and then if he Nina should spot this one right here is also a redundancy it's a shockingly surprised and when we say shock surprise not in Yoon so again him on a high lands have been a shockingly service good luck now good let's check on a gulet I don't get in a hurry money by any mana Highlands happy he not I don't us I mean a gulet shot so this park right here you can take away the dwarf was surprised you in lung yellow mie one in the first line that's the next line by the evident appearance this one right here is also problematic bucket especially a big every day it makes a me here Nikita no way it's something that is seen or abused so wanna keep an eye on evidence and appearance und no ABC bohemia' Nana Akita Masha epic severe in Dimona violence I mean evident young appearance Casino appearance that word in itself miss Amy Tina no not Akita Masha so in America dying emphasize not evident Yumi sound appearance so we don't need this word anymore we can just take it out so the dwarf was surprised by the appearance again my streamlined machine play mass model a of that and this part right here is the same as this this is a Ito enormous name is already a redundancy market sheep oxen having giant molecule animal giant normally it right near Amanda epidemic latina giant normally it okay hey Lauren the giant the world in itself already means a big person so it's already big so humanness Abigail has been enormous big giant Nieman Highlands opinion giant now so we can also take this out so the same thing so materially is the dwarf was surprised by the appearance of the Zion okay so you have one two three four four redundancies in one sentence so your exercise the odds are linked that a post Sababa will be the same basically I'll give you an entire pattern paragraph I want you to spot all the redundancies the explainer for that will also be posted there okay so if you want more exercises go ahead and click the link sale Allium right alright who you know saw you today if you did click thumbs up make sure that I share this video to your friends done dozen exams in salaat my namaz forgot me talking with the look like and if you want to reach out to me directly get reviewer shirts or anything that I made you can go to the beat the beat of e dot fees without comms lash team like I'd love to hear back from you thanks guys for watching and as always never stop learning good subscribe if you haven't yet hit the bell icon Pat away like imma miss some poeple take phenomenal videos and as a guy yen never stop learning I'll see you the next video and bye for now [Music] [Music] [Music]

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Length: 19min 48sec (1188 seconds)

Published: Tue Feb 05 2019