PROTO - Sci-Fi Short Film (Full Length)

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Great story. The CGI was very well done, too.

πŸ‘οΈŽ︎ 10 πŸ‘€οΈŽ︎ u/indieforge πŸ“…οΈŽ︎ Oct 16 2014 πŸ—«︎ replies

I watched it all the way through. On this sub, that's rare. Well done.

πŸ‘οΈŽ︎ 21 πŸ‘€οΈŽ︎ u/Nickyjtjr πŸ“…οΈŽ︎ Oct 16 2014 πŸ—«︎ replies

Overall enjoyed it, but I'll list my criticism below:

  • Plot seems very by-the-numbers. This isn't inherently a bad thing as the story has been done, it's honestly mostly the older, mean scientist's dialogue that makes it feel very formulaic.
  • None of the performances were bad. (Other than the "It doesn't like it, it is a machine!" part) It's the way it was presented. There was no build-up to the way the older scientist would feel. No close-ups of him growing impatient, no subtlety with his expectations. It was simply
  • The only thing you had to showcase that the demo was important was the champagne and the fact that the older scientist becomes a bit subservient.

Nitpicking:

  • "Now Proto serve." He's a highly intelligent robot but you need to speak to him like an ESL speaker?
  • Why do the lights for the whole building instantly turn off because a TV malfunctioned?

Curiosity:

  • British call a ping pong paddle a "bat"?
πŸ‘οΈŽ︎ 15 πŸ‘€οΈŽ︎ u/loller πŸ“…οΈŽ︎ Oct 16 2014 πŸ—«︎ replies

Wow dude, this is so great. I really love that CGI, it is really impressive. Overall, this has become one of my favourite shorts!

πŸ‘οΈŽ︎ 5 πŸ‘€οΈŽ︎ u/Task1337 πŸ“…οΈŽ︎ Oct 16 2014 πŸ—«︎ replies

Don't know who is going down the thread down voting your comments, but ignore them, it's nice to see genuine happiness over this sort of thing.

Great film by the way, lovely production and I can only hope to get on your level.

If you don't mind sharing some advice or pointing me in the right direction, where in the UK other than KICKSTARTER can I gain some funding for my own projects?

πŸ‘οΈŽ︎ 3 πŸ‘€οΈŽ︎ u/loukitch πŸ“…οΈŽ︎ Oct 16 2014 πŸ—«︎ replies

Didn't expect to sit through another "short film", really reeled me in. Superb job!

πŸ‘οΈŽ︎ 3 πŸ‘€οΈŽ︎ u/roqqingit πŸ“…οΈŽ︎ Oct 16 2014 πŸ—«︎ replies

Brilliant! I love the attention to detail on the violin fingering.

πŸ‘οΈŽ︎ 4 πŸ‘€οΈŽ︎ u/rocen πŸ“…οΈŽ︎ Oct 16 2014 πŸ—«︎ replies

This took me two years, from writing, through getting some public funding (UK Film Council), through pre production, filming and finally post.

Hope you enjoy!

πŸ‘οΈŽ︎ 8 πŸ‘€οΈŽ︎ u/RedofPaw πŸ“…οΈŽ︎ Oct 16 2014 πŸ—«︎ replies

which camera/lenses did you use for this?

πŸ‘οΈŽ︎ 3 πŸ‘€οΈŽ︎ u/anciar πŸ“…οΈŽ︎ Oct 16 2014 πŸ—«︎ replies
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[Music] you really are an amazing little fella in it you're gonna prove to everyone that you're the best robot ever made aren't you right let's get you over to the testing area proto you used the bat to hit the ball to the end of the table and then return it do you understand okay Protoss begin Protoss adaptation to the tests is beyond all expectations this is only the first they'll soon be thousands of others just like you I think perhaps okay proto that's enough now but oh stop it disobedience is unacceptable if you will do as you're told do you understand you should listen to professor Andrews he's a brilliant man it's just not very patient don't worry we'll get there [Music] [Music] [Music] [Music] [Music] [Applause] [Music] [Applause] [Music] [Music] [Applause] [Music] [Applause] [Music] [Applause] [Music] what is this Simon protests be learning to play he must like it it doesn't like it it is a machine photo is undisciplined erratic adjust then this close to the demonstration we can't allow these hiccups to derail us keep proto away from Symphony this mustn't happen again I thought you were quite good come on [Music] [Music] now proton self [Music] yes well done proto [Music] these emotional outbursts lack of discipline becoming tiresome robot we cannot control cannot be used [Music] [Music] [Music] we ready Roger prepared five minutes professor and we're good to go oh let's put these transgressions behind us shall we we're about to demonstrate the greatest robotic system ever created I'm not so sure these transgressions are such a bad thing perhaps we should see them as evidence of a greater potential the military has no need for a disobedient robot and neither do i proto fails to perform all have no further use for him [Music] good evening thank you for attending and we are honored to be joined by General Sir Geoffrey Forbes Adams I'm sure you'll all be impressed by this evenings demonstration let me introduce you to protonic [Music] what you're about to see has not been pre-programmed proto has learned to play through observation and verbal commands alone proto so [Music] this is a first for an autonomous system anywhere in the world as you can see proto has learned well but what you are witnessing here today is merely the beginning proto's system can be adapted to perform any whoa domestic industrial and of course military prototype unquestioning obedience [Music] no questions no fear no emotion no freedom to disobey a system that will redefine the science of warfare ladies and gentlemen I give you pronto the future of robotics [Music] [Music] [Applause] general general apologize this this has never happened before if you could just come back we could reset the demonstration and I assure you it's proto's not in the demonstration area he's gone [Music] there could be anywhere by now solution step away from the edge proto proto please come back from the edge it's not safe look we can talk about this we ridiculous not gonna talk about anything proto doesn't get the decide anything come down now or is it the right command [Music] [Applause] [Music] you [Music] [Applause] [Music] [Applause] [Music] you you
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Channel: RedofPaw
Views: 3,253,865
Rating: 4.7566805 out of 5
Keywords: Short Film (Film Genre), Film (Media Genre), Sci-Fi-London (Film Festival), Science Fiction, Robotics (Industry), Visual Effects (Film Company Role Or Service), Visual Effects, Robot (Film Subject)
Id: Ji8va4IMmmY
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Length: 15min 5sec (905 seconds)
Published: Thu Oct 16 2014
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