"The Weeper" Creepypasta

you you you know that feeling you get when you see something that you weren't supposed to see that gut-wrenching churn that you feel in the pit of your stomach when you realize you can't unsee whatever it is that you witnessed that feeling where it almost feels like you've made a mistake by witnessing whatever it was but yet it was completely beyond your control yeah I know that feeling in fact I've definitely seen something that I shouldn't have and now that something is watching me I doubt I have much time so I'll try to make this quick I don't know what use it is to me to give you any warning should you find yourself in my situation there's nothing you can do anyway at least nothing that I know of I don't know why it shows me I don't know why it chooses anyone but should it choose you the only thing you can do is pray that you manage to avoid looking at it no matter how hard it tries to get your attention I don't know when or how it first saw me I guess probably one of my many nights that I was walking home late after class when I cut through the park by the lake that's where it seems to be most of the time so if at all possible avoid that park or any park at night I guess that seems like a pretty good rule of thumb to follow anyway so it shouldn't be too difficult for you to follow it but whenever it was that it actually saw me must have been when it chose me I don't know if it chose me because I took that route on a regular basis or if I'm just unlucky but either way all it took was two weeks of me taking that same way home every night before it had made its decision at the two week mark is when it decided that I was its target target probably isn't a good word for it pray is a more appropriate term that night felt just like any other night I was exhausted from a long day and had my earphones in as I made my way through the park the park has a lot of trees along the lake and sidewalk not enough to be considered a forest or anything but enough that against the dim glow of the street lamps they created dozens and dozens of tall dark silhouettes it was a little eerie but it wasn't enough to keep me from taking that way home for the last two weeks straight on that particular night about halfway through the park is when it first tried to get my attention it started with a sound that made me take out my earphones confused and I was searching all around me for the source have you ever been wearing earphones or headphones and you thought you heard someone say your name but you just couldn't tell for sure that's what it was like he was subtle but enough for me to notice and stop in my tracks I can't really describe what the noise was it sounded like a whisper but I couldn't make out any of the words the sound was gone as soon as I took my earphones out and after a quick 360 to assess my surroundings I came to the conclusion that my mind was playing tricks on me due to exhaustion a little spooked I made the second half of my trip through the park a lot quicker than the first the next night was different my morning classes had been canceled so I wasn't nearly as exhausted on the trip home my mind was on the new video game I had tucked into my backpack that I was planning on tearing into when I got back home I didn't have my earphones in this time so you can imagine my discomfort when I heard that sound again the bizarre part about it was that even without the earphones the sound was exactly the same something resembling quiet murmuring just slightly too low to make out the words it was so brief like someone saying my name to try and get my attention but so quickly and quietly that I just couldn't be certain the hair on the back of my neck stood on end and I cautiously looked to the left and right of me expecting to see a hobo or possibly just someone on their smartphone mumbling under their breath to themselves as they lost yet another game of words with runs when I didn't see anyone I got the ominous feeling that I was being watched thoroughly freaked out I slowly took a step forward to continue my journey without skipping a beat the sound of a branch snapping on the ground echoed about 200 feet behind me off to the side of the walkway now genuinely frightened I began to sprint as fast as I could from the source of the noise after putting an additional fifty feet between me and the noise in question I made the mistake of turning around to look behind me although it was too far to see clearly I was able to make out a tall thin figure against the glow of the street lamp that it stood under from as far away as I was it could have looked like a person but I didn't give it a second thought as I booked it out of the park little did I know that first glimpse was enough for it to get closer to me the next time around I got out of class early the next day and chalking last night's events up to either my imagination or some weirdo who wanted to sell me drugs in the park I decided that since it was still daylight that it would be safer for me to take my normal route home I figured there'd be people in the park at that time of day and no shadows to play tricks on my mind feeling totally at ease I decided to swing by the ice-cream cart that the local sweet little old ice-cream man would push around the lake during the afternoon I ordered my favorite an ice cream sandwich but felt a cold shiver run down my spine as the old man lifted the shiny glass cover of his car to retrieve it that familiar unsettling noise echoed through my ears and in the reflection of the glass I caught a glimpse of the same tall dark figure from the night before this time about a hundred and fifty feet away from me I froze terrified for the brief few seconds that the old man had the cover of the cart lifted to retrieve my ice cream my mind scrambled to remember what I had seen but what my memory provided back to me didn't really seem humanly possible the figure was easily eight maybe nine feet tall whoever or whatever it was was dressed in a long black cloak for lack of a better word the face was the hardest part to remember by this point I still hadn't focused on its face not that it made a difference my thoughts raced trying to comprehend why the ice-cream guy wasn't freaking out with me at whatever the thing was standing behind me was the old man cheerfully handed me my purchase raising an eyebrow and asking me if I was okay I guess I must have nodded because he didn't press the issue after a short moment of silence and no terrified reaction to anything behind me from the ice-cream cart man I mustered the courage to look behind me nothing I took my ice-cream and proceeded on my walk home my brain reeling for an answer as to what just happened I took note that finals were next week and dutifully chalked up the alleged hallucinations to the underlying stress I tried to shake off the uneasy feeling but it never quite went away even after I made it home I didn't know why but I had felt like something had followed me home I wasn't as lucky the next evening the park was closed for maintenance my second option being to walk around the outside of the fence an extra 20-minute walk down a quiet thoroughfare with an iron fence on one side and a poorly lit Street on the other I let out an aggravated sigh and began to make my way along the fence I wish I had remembered my earphones instead of leaving them at school because after 10 minutes of walking in silence a sound made my stomach sink it started out so softly that I didn't hear it over the sound of myself walking but eventually it became audible enough that I could clearly make out what it was the sound of a hard object being drugged slowly across the iron bars of the fence one by one slowly but quickly enough to match the pace that I was walking only about 100 feet behind me I didn't turn to look back but the hair on the back of my neck told me that something was there as soon as I stopped walking the clinging behind me stopped as well my heart was pounding so quickly that I couldn't even breathe I don't know which was worse knowing that something was behind me but not what it was or the idea of turning around and actually seeing it with my own eyes deep down I had a sinking feeling in my stomach about what I would find if I turned around and not a single fiber of my being wanting anything to do with whoever or whatever it was but the decision was made for me it seems out from the silence from behind me a new noise similar to the murmurs from before filled my ears draining my face of color a low gurgling moan like the wail of torment from someone drowning echoed from behind me instinct caused me to quickly turn and evaluate the source of the noise and what I saw instilled a terror in me that I didn't think was possible the feeling that I talked about earlier the feeling of seeing something that you shouldn't have that's the feeling that rushed over me as I stared at the creature in front of me I had focused on the face this time but out of the corner of my eye I could see the long thin black arms that hung almost to its knees attached to those arms were hands with thin bone like fingers easily three to four times longer than any human I'd ever seen even though it was draped in a cloak I could tell the body was inhumanly thin and the proportions were all unnatural the torso and legs were ghastly and long the creatures posture looked crooked as if it had a kink or a hunch in its back that caused its shoulders to hang forward in front of its face and its face if it even can be called that the first thing I saw were the eyes small very small tiny beady little white eyes sunken into large gaping black holes the top of the creatures face was covered by what looked to be a mask made to resemble a white porcelain doll but cracked in half missing everything from the nose downward around the eyes and the eye holes of the masks were cartoonishly painted black eyelashes like the ones you'd see on a Raggedy Ann toy but the mask and the eyes beneath were nothing compared to the horror that hung beneath them a grotesque abomination of a mouth hung loosely from the edge of the mask it swung freely as if the creatures jaw had been severed on both sides allowing it to fall open revealing a crudely removed tongue and three rows of human teeth along the bottom of the jaw behind the mask and around the mouth was smooth black skin torn brutally around where the jaw was once connected to the skull of whatever it was from the nightmarish orifice it had four a mouth the gurgling moan emanated once again still resembling a wail of despair the sound was enough to snap me out of my state of shock because I was able to realize that the creature had begun moving towards me its movements made my stomach turn the sound of bone on bone and every joint in the creatures body popped and jerked in various directions growing louder as it closed the distance between us my fight-or-flight instinct finally switched into gear and I turned and bolted in the opposite direction but not before the thing had closed another fifty feet of the remaining 100-foot gap between us that's when the realisation had finally sunk in the longer I look at it the closer it would get to me and it was doing whatever it could to get me to look at it I kept running towards where I thought would be the safest downtown lots of people around even at night I didn't know if this thing cared about witnesses but suddenly my memory was brought back to the incident the day before with the ice-cream man in the park it became obvious that it could only be seen by whoever or whatever it wanted to see it which in this case regrettably was me I made it to the heart of downtown stopping to catch my breath outside a trendy nightclub with a long line of people waiting outside to get in a lean on the wall of the building on the opposite side of the entrance from where the line was formed after a few moments of gasping for air and getting my heart rate under control I turned to look at the line of people hoping to see someone that I recognized or maybe a police officer nearby that might help me out instead omits the line of people what caught my eye were those cold piercing white eyes and that smooth haunting porcelain face it towered high above any of the other patrons it's blank stare fixed on me from behind the people it began to move alongside the line of people barely giving me a chance to react before it had closed another 25 feet by the time I stopped looking at it it was only about 25 feet away making that stomach churning wailing noise it gained another 5 feet when I accidentally turned and saw its reflection in the side mirror of a taxi parked outside the nightclub fast forward to now I had made it all the way back home but it gained another 5 feet when I saw it standing in the yard outside my bedroom window if it keeps moving at the same pace then I estimated I only get one more look before it gets me you see I've locked myself in the bathroom and the door faces the mirror so no matter what I do whether I walk backwards or forwards out of here I'm sort of out of luck I can hear the noise coming from outside the door and even if I do make it out of this room it's only a matter of time until I passed by a reflective surface so hopefully this message reaches you before it's too late if you find yourself in the same situation and also be sure to mind your manners it's not very polite to stare you

Channel: CreepyPastaJr

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Id: RBNZQHbqhDw

Length: 15min 6sec (906 seconds)

Published: Sat Nov 12 2016