Ten Minute History - The Early British Empire (Short Documentary)
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Channel: History Matters
Views: 4,213,550
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Length: 9min 59sec (599 seconds)
Published: Mon Sep 26 2016
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For those wondering, the reason I've made this is to be useful to teachers teaching either A Level or GCSE history since I feel that there isn't enough quick and consumable videos out there for the classroom. Any feedback would be appreciated since I'm new to this.
Hey, this is good stuff. You've clearly done the legwork in terms of research and (I'm assuming you're using AE for the visuals) you've got your head around the basics of animation. The two main things I would try and work on is:
A: Pace. I know the problem you've got - people don't really watch anything that goes over the 10min mark and you've got a lot to cram in BUT at the moment you're in danger of just building a really long list of stuff that's relentless in terms of pace and -dare a say it - just a little monotone. That's a problem because it's like being bludgeoned with facts and it's easy to lose the narrative thread after a minute or two. What you need to do is a) whittle down the content a little and b) vary the pace, dynamics and intonation. By that I mean work some pauses in as well as letting your voice break out of reading and become more conversational.
B: I know first hand how labour intensive animation is and what you've got is good. However, your characters need a little work as they're letting the aesthetic down a little. My advice would be to either think about using Photoshop to cutout characters from original period paintings and then animating them in AE (like I've done in this vid) or rebuilding the characters you already have in Illustrator with the Pen Tool and thickening the strokes right up. Even better, once you've thickened them, use the Width Adjustment Tool to vary the width of their strokes at various points. Trust me, this simple trick will make them look loads better. Oh, and avoid the 'using a a really soft brush for hair and beards' trap. Get confident with the Pen Tool and build it like a cell animation.
Apart from that though I think it's great and something you should be proud of. Keep it up and feel free to DM me if there's anything I've mentioned that you're not sure about.
Its really good!
Couple of teeny tiny things:
Still I guess you're trying to get it under 10 mins. Another weird and probably irrelevant point that I always loved was that the party that clashed on the border that was part of the catalyst for the seven years war contained a certain George Washington within it.
BTW - if you're doing more in the future and consider using voice acting to spice it up then let me know as I can probably give you some fun voices.
Really enjoyed it, but it stops too early! What about Britain's expansion across the Indian subcontinent? What about Africa? The Middle East? Do another one! lol, it was good...
That was very well done, good work mate.
Just a quick point: you need to pronounce the last syllable in Felipe.
I love the sort of golden age for history videos that YouTube is goung through right now. Historia Civilis, ReplyHistory, Epic History TV, The Great War, Extra History, plus a host of smaller channels like BazBattles and now this.
Do keep it up and ensure that you promote them. You've only got 25 subs at the moment, but if you can maintain the quality, you're almost certain to reach 1000 within only a few videos.
It's fantastic. Add some stock music / royalty free ukulele (actually maybe not that) though - in a starnge way makes things more enjoyable.
Also stick a compressor on your voice.
I really enjoyed this, thank you! A little bit of "atmosphere music" might go down well.