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[Music] [Music] this shot was too quick and not establishing why remake in chana mob's pizzeria map he literally made that up it's not based off sister location at all scaled up fire it would have been much more visually appealing to make the fire to scale with the building with the fire scaled up it makes the building feel like it's a tiny lego set obvious edge of the map [Music] the offset of these blocks on the wall are distracting [Music] the uv stretch in the vents has returned why are these metal vents on fire and why only in that one area how is this plastic cup not caught in fire yet why is this hinting at the music video from resolve dnz's channel if this video is a continuation why is it on a different channel now so if this is a continuation i thought the building was like collapsing before it seems fine and dandy now besides it being on fire scrap baby reaches out for you to take her out of this music video before it's too late what did any of that beginning scene have to do with what we're seeing now it should have been setting up shots of michael and showing how he got to where he is now also flying in and out of faces super fast is not a transition this is michael it's michael you should you see your name tag right there it's my this michael it's michael [Music] the camera focuses on michael for a long time here there's been six different camera shots on michael all these shots could have been replaced with establishing shots of how he got to where he is that would have given the viewer a better sense of what's going on [Music] how is the red still shining on the sides of the blocks here if the light source just got covered [Music] these super stretched uv's on the wall oh blackton is back tin blackton is backton also this is handy everybody look at the name tag this henry's henry you're perfect for this occupation wait what can michael see blackton this needs to be more clear nothing happened when you press the button at least it didn't show anything you should have made some indicator that something happened what are these facial expressions [Music] so let me get this straight you're saying baby was crawling on the ground all the way to get to michael here i would have liked to seen that rather than this random button push [Music] there's no way you were keeping a wrench that huge in your pocket also why would you even have a wrench that big on you at all times oh yeah this is my giganto wrench i use it for unexpected minecraft circus baby attacks that punch was more like a nudge michael's kind of a pushover animation has so much boondoggling each movement has no purpose and just exists to prevent the characters from standing still circus baby's movements are so slow and don't fully pose how it should and it just screams mediocrity why does everyone do this now the character completely changes attitude and or personality in order to fit the song animations are supposed to be built on the foundations of the song and expand on the ideas rather than just sticking to exactly what is happening when it is happening that's how you make your animations feel natural oh and now the wrench is on him wait does that mean circus baby gave him his wrench back aren't you trying to capture this guy come on think don't give your captor a weapon circus baby must have been like whoops i think he dropped this i'll just put it on his belt in case he needs it later those hip movements look strange i mean they aren't nearly as bad as echo coasters hit movements but it looks like the skirt is bending not the actual hip wait are they going to the scooper at least make the map look similar to sister location this looks like some sort of random labyrinth from skyrim this random flicker of light that run cycle there are much better ways you could have shown the breaking free moment this looks like the laziest way also what are these camera angles when purple guy breaks free the camera just aims at the ceiling then to the far right then to the far left while circus baby hunches over and then frowns where's the focus also circus baby's facial expressions reset once the faceplates come together this run cycle looks like more of a slow glide purple guy isn't even bobbing up and down [Music] why was funtime freddy just hiding in a locker has he just been hiding in that locker forever just waiting for someone to run by so he can open it dramatically also why is there even a random locker in the middle of a hall why does the lighting keep changing keep your lighting consistent storage why would he run to the storage michael should be familiar with the area so why wouldn't he just run over to the elevator he came from michael why are you just standing there you just escaped from circus baby she's going to be chasing you you know for a song called they'll keep you running there isn't much running going on purple guy breaks the fourth wall and acknowledges blacktin which doesn't exist again i'm not sure if blacktin isn't even actually there anymore also where did the freddy locker go he just ran past it things have calmed down quite a bit now michael just casually walks into the storage room even though two seconds ago he was running for his life down this very hallway heck circus baby could have caught him if she just jogged over here again and gave him a little nudge punch this is implying that funtime freddy sees through the eyes of bonbon but that's just dumb freddie must be just awkwardly staring at the wall while he sticks his hand out from the corner michael closes the metal mechanical doors and yet somehow funtime freddy teleports into the room even if you argue that he ran into the room before this happened and pressed a button he would make loud metal steps that would surely alarm michael years before this happened uh you okay there freddy you're looking straight up at the ceiling for no reason also where's the purple light coming from shining on funtime freddy heck i don't think any of the lights have origins in this video all of the ceiling lights are white but this room is orange we need consistency here this is awkward just gonna stand here until the lyrics start one moment please this extreme camera shake isn't needed here it would be better to have it on an action-packed sequence but they're just standing here these camera cuts are disorienting and add nothing to the plot or feel we just see michael get scared for the thousandth time show us something different don't be stealing everyone ironic when freddy sings don't be still he's just standing there and hunching forward quite the thrill even you must agree it's not fair just to keep us waiting i'm pretty sure bon bon and funtime freddy have their own unique voice in the game so sin quietly also why would michael want to pull the fire alarm i'm pretty sure some water wouldn't turn these things off if they're this advanced also also i don't see any place on the ceiling from water to shoot from man that is a really bad plan these are just incoherent random clips that not only don't go with the same visuals but the song is well at this point also no not another void scene sss flickering worry this is a fast part of the song but the visuals here are so slow and boring oh guess we're back what was even the point of that did they just need to get in their daily dose of useless void scenes for such little power in that swing michael sure flew a long way why do this creepy way of nearing when freddy could just walk up and grab michael right now he's not intimidating anyone right now why are the doors sideways linear tangents on the camera please what kind of walk cycle is this he's not even bobbing up and down that's like the foundations of a walk cycle literally what is up with the circus baby hip movement it is way over exaggerated and it's just distracting when it's supposed to give them personality also skirt clipping this scene isn't familiar at all what is foxy doing what what are the correlations of these clips michael wasn't even being dragged over to them and then the camera just cuts to the scooping room and just why would you show it this way if it's the perspective of michael we should have cut to this after he was knocked out consistency [Music] nobody at this table is eating anything maybe they're about to eat that giant turd in the middle of the dining table [Music] his face [Music] while this seems like the slowest and laziest way to treat the bridge of the song it definitely is creative so sin off for that but i'm giving a sin back because this scene doesn't tie into the narrative of the rest of the song there are dishes and silverware set up here even though nobody is sitting there [Music] the song has a scream okay just insert some random character screaming and it'll be good even though it makes no sense in this visual context where's michael wasn't he in front of the scooper or is he still stuck at that dining table leading turds wow his insides are scooped out without a scratch forming on him that is some state-of-the-art equipment right there why does his head look so big here it looks like it inflated like a balloon more teleportation [Music] you could have shown the creation of enerd in a more creative way than just a cut to black there could have been opportunities for a much cooler looking shot [Music] [Music] dang enerd's been skipping leg day at least make blood drip this is not convincing at all what really leaves an impact after watching these videos is when the viewers think whoa how did he do that but no all that's being shown is animation and unparenting body parts there's no never before seen effects that make this part stand out or give a payoff for watching this video this is supposed to be the climax right this twitching looks more like the rig is glitching the twitches are way too extreme unnecessary black screen is unnecessary [Music] those steps reach out way too far forward it's supposed to be the other way around [Music] what is this signifying what is blackton's relevance when he was supposed to be michael's conscience or something blackton just lost his way i guess i doubt ennard will be able to hold this entire metal hatch open with one hand like this [Music] why would there be a staircase leading into a hole in the ground i know the novels say there are holes in the ground but the visuals did not explain this well this is a creative allusion to the house from fnaf 4. i've never seen this done in these types of videos before once in off [Music] a big jump there the time past is unexplained and could have been demonstrated better putting the animator skins in the video cliche [Music] what is in the background is that like a walmart or something what the sidewalk goes down a level in this neighborhood what kind of infrastructure is this [Music] of course it was shown in this way flickering black screen instead of showing what actually happens because it would require more work than just keyframing what you have his right arm clips through the stone slabs wait is this video the origin story of blackton it all makes sense now in conclusion this is good for a first music video there were a few unique shots the pacing was good but the overall execution of the story was done in the laziest way possible the animation was good overall lighting was mostly good overall other than a few inconsistencies visible origin points for lighting would have helped more sets were okay but it really could have used some more innovation it often seemed repetitive and steered away from the sister location feel the main thing for improving would be just going the extra mile for scenes like the scooping room especially when it's at the climax actually show the construction of enter and the destruction of afton you don't have to be gruesome to make it interesting or clever go the full nine yards you

Channel: Animation Sins

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Id: 31Ii1xCEV60

Length: 15min 2sec (902 seconds)

Published: Mon Aug 27 2018