"Don't look unless you hear the door" Creepypasta

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have you ever heard those noises around your home late at night sounds of moving around but you write it off as the neighbors or the creaking walls as the whole place settles yeah I've heard them too all the time actually sometimes it's a bit creepy but usually I don't think much about it that's what I was thinking when I first heard the sounds that night it was three years ago and I was sitting in my apartment bedroom playing video games I remember the game was Dark Souls because there's quite a bit of that game that can be fairly quiet when there's not a lot of action happening my wife was half awake in bed behind me watching me play from my half fold-out chair I used to play games I didn't like sitting on the bed it was too far away especially with my sleepy wife I would have to share it with every time I turned back from my chair she was drifting off a little bit more each time after about half an hour I heard the soft rhythmic sounds of snoring I checked and saw she had fallen asleep I smiled and continued playing quietly then I heard other noises it sounded like someone was walking up and down the stairs very faintly it would be quiet for some time and then I would hear something else very faint very distant a few more muffled steps somewhere in the apartment now I lived next to where very kind of old woman who's hard of hearing so I was used to her moving about in the night and making noise I remember the first night I heard her moving at night I rushed out of my room with a baseball bat in my boxes ready to fight off the would-be intruder except of course no one was in the apartment when I told the poor old lady about it the next day she informed me the walls were very thin and and I probably just heard her moving at night don't bother checking on it unless you hear the door open all right trust me your door squeaks so damn loud even I can hear it she said with a kindly laugh and if your windows are anything like mine Sammy then the only way someone is getting in through those is if they break them thing won't budge keep telling my grandson to come and fix it her ride was pulling up to the curb with a light hunk she smiled don't worry about it unless you hear the door kid oh I remembered that any other time I heard bumps and thuds and I remembered it that night as well sure it was an odd hour but the old lady had odd habits wasn't the first time she was moving around this late I was ready to dismiss the idea completely when I heard a new noise from the apartment another set of shuffling steps and then clang this made me put down the controller I knew that sound it was the sound of the frying pan I left out falling off of the counter in the kitchen below me then more shuffling my wife stood behind me Sam what was that she asked without opening her eyes I don't know I'm gonna go check it out I said getting up from the chair I took a few steps through the door and reach for the bat I kept behind it I'll be right back I turned and slowly open the door to the dark hallway and say nothing I let out a sigh and then I saw something moving in the darkness adrenaline shot through me I grasped the bat with white knuckles but nothing else happened nothing charged me I was safe but I still heard something on the stairs I slowly turned the corner to check the stairs and reach for the light switch I flipped the switch I didn't see anything at the bottom of the stairs a howl came over the house I froze adrenaline pumped through me then it faded away and I realized I'd become so wound up but the down wind had spooked me I collected myself and descended the stairs letting the bat fall to my side I got to the living room and looked about I didn't see anyone or anything down there but somehow when I looked up into the kitchen I saw the frying pan sitting upright in the middle of the tiled floor far from the counter I raised my bat again and approached it slowly I bent down to pick it up when I heard a new sound behind me breathing in my ear I spun and swung the bat in the same motion and it clipped something with a thud it crumpled to the ground with a Yelp of pain an awfully familiar Yelp of pain and then a string of curses Sam what the hell my poor wife held her arm I dropped the bat and brought my hands to my mouth oh I'm so sorry I grabbed down to my wife and held out my hand are you alright yeah yeah I'm fine you missed my head at least she chuckled gonna have a bowl of the office telling people how I got this bruise my face went hard from embarrassment you know Jamie's never going to let this one go Carly I helped her up that sounds like a personal problem doesn't it she looked at me and rubbed her arm and then a cold breeze was a look of confusion over her face darling did you open the window she asked with a shiver my face went from red from shame to white with fear no I said darting to the window I reached the window in the living room and closed it why hadn't I noticed that before had it been open before something slammed against the window with a crash hard enough to on a shatter the glass then I heard is gurgling strained breathing I saw it's hideous in human face dead black eyes stared back at me with an odd face out of a nightmare it wasn't human my head hurt just looking at it I couldn't see movement where its mouth should have been if it even had a mouth but it spoke to me through the glass I'll be right back he said to me in my voice a twisted echo of what I said earlier down to the intonation it stared at me for a long moment before disappearing right before my eyes I stood there petrified until I came to and rushed to the phone to call the police he didn't stay there that night and didn't return until the morning the police had come and gone being unable to find any signs of a break-in dismiss the whole thing as a prank call my neighbor was waiting for us outside that foggy morning as we rolled back in she approached us more Stern then I'd ever seen her you went and investigated the sounds didn't you boy she said her head shocked I thought I told you don't look unless he hear the door what was that I asked you don't want to know just do what I said and don't look unless you hear the door she strode back to a door and paused then looked back it's what I do when I hear him start locking your bedroom door it knows you know now I don't know what this thing is and I don't know what it's capable of but I like my door at night and deadbolt the front and back door I've got alarms on the windows I still hear the noises though so if you ever hear noises in your apartment at night and you can't explain it and there's no way someone could have broken in be careful just to be safe stay in bed close your eyes try your best to ignore it and don't go looking for it
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Channel: CreepsMcPasta
Views: 636,222
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Keywords: creepy pasta, top creepypasta, creepypasta, horror list, paranormal, horror, narration, scary, reading, narrator, creepsmcpasta, jumpscare, dramatic reading, audiobook, scary true story, short
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Length: 10min 41sec (641 seconds)
Published: Sun Mar 27 2016
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